What is the best thing about learning English?

2020-05-26 · 첨삭 강사 Sheila

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I use English often because I am dealing with overseas buyers in my job. and then, Learning English and self-development gives me confidence in my life. I will keep trying for future my life.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

You did well in making longer sentences. Just be careful with the grammar.

~Teacher Sheila

I use English often because I am dealing with overseas buyers in my job.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I often use English because I deal with overseas buyers as part of my job.

and then, Learning English and self-development gives me confidence in my life.

>>Learning English and self-development give me confidence in life.

I will keep trying for future my life.

>>I will keep trying for my future life.

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