What is the best thing about living in Seoul?
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, Beth~!
Today is national holiday of 3rd day. ㅜㅜ.
Time goes by too past.
It was not holdiay Last Thursday. The national holiday is just 4 days from Friday to Monday.
But we had to go to Busan while a short time. So my honey took a leave last Thursday.
We went to go there in KTX which took about 2 and a half hours from here in Ilsan with my son who is just 6 months old.
Now, we are taking a rest our home. My baby looks pretty tired because he is deep-sleeping since we came back home.
Maybe we\'ll take an airplane next time.
Anyway, I\'ll tell you to homework.
By the way, is this same subject last class?
Because I was born in Seoul so, I had told you about my birthplace which is the best thing.
I think that my birthplace\'s best thing is school group.
There are many schools of high level in Seoul. If we are in Seoul, my son will have various experiences there.
And the best place is Lotte Tower which is the 3rd largest in the world as fas as I know.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Thank you for this. Traveling to a far distance is indeed tiring, but I hope you had a great time.
- T. Beth
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Today is national holiday of 3rd day. ㅜㅜ.>>> Today is the third day of the national holiday.
Time goes by too past.
Time goes by too past.
>>> correct
It was not holdiay Last Thursday.
It was not holdiay Last Thursday.
>>> It was not a holiday last Thursday.
The national holiday is just 4 days from Friday to Monday.
>>> correct
But we had to go to Busan while a short time.
But we had to go to Busan while a short time.
>>> Bur we had to go to Busan for a short time.
So my honey took a leave last Thursday.
>>> correct
We went to go there in KTX which took about 2 and a half hours from here in Ilsan with my son who is just 6 months old.
We went to go there in KTX which took about 2 and a half hours from here in Ilsan with my son who is just 6 months old.
>>> We went there through KTX which took about 2 and a half hours from here in Ilsan with my son who is just 6 months old.
Now, we are taking a rest our home.
>>> Now, we are taking a rest at home.
My baby looks pretty tired because he is deep-sleeping since we came back home.
>>> OR: My baby looks pretty tired because he has been sleeping deeply since we came back home.
Maybe we\'ll take an airplane next time.
>>> correct
Anyway, I\'ll tell you to homework.
Maybe we\'ll take an airplane next time.
>>> correct
Anyway, I\'ll tell you to homework.
>>> Anyway, I\'ll tell you about my homework.
By the way, is this same subject last class?
>>> By the way, is this the same subject as last class?
Because I was born in Seoul so, I had told you about my birthplace which is the best thing.
>>> Because I was born in Seoul, so I had told you about the best thing in my birthplace.
I think that my birthplace\'s best thing is school group.
>>> correct
There are many schools of high level in Seoul.
There are many schools of high level in Seoul.
>>> correct
If we are in Seoul, my son will have various experiences there.
>>> correct
And the best place is Lotte Tower which is the 3rd largest in the world as fas as I know.
And the best place is Lotte Tower which is the 3rd largest in the world as fas as I know.
>>> And the best place is Lotte Tower which is the 3rd largest in the world, as far as I know.
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