What is the best thing about the month of July? Write at least two.

2024-07-02 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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I think the best thing about the month of July is raining days because raining days are fun. And I\'m happy because I have a summer vacation in July.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Yale!

Here\'s your revised homework. Many thanks for sending it. Please take a look at the few and minor revisions made. Have a good one!  


Cheers,
Jean~~



                           What is the best thing about the month of July? Write at least two.


I think the best thing about the month of July is raining days because raining days are fun.
>> I think the best thing about the month of July is rainy days because they are fun.

And I\'m happy because I have a summer vacation in July.
>> OR: Also, I have a school vacation this month so I\'m happy. 

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