What is the best thing about your birthplace?
학생이 쓴 원문
I was born in Seoul, Korea. Seoul is the capital of Korea. There are many buildings and wealthy people in the city. So famous private educational institutes and many luxury shops are distributed in the city. As Seoul is the capital of Korea, many major companies are also distributed. Therefore, the land naturally became expensive there and many people want to live in the city.
강사 첨삭
Hello Do Hyun!
Thank you for your response on your homework. It describes how your City looks like.
Have a great day. See you in class.
T. Aki~
I was born in Seoul, Korea. >>> CORRECT
Seoul is the capital of Korea.
>>> CORRECT
There are many buildings and wealthy people in the city.
>>> CORRECT
So, famous private educational institutes and many luxury shops are distributed in the city.
>>> CORRECT
As Seoul is the capital of Korea, many major companies are also distributed.
>>> CORRECT
Therefore, the land naturally became expensive there and many people want to live in the city.
>>> Therefore, the land naturally became expensive and many people want to live in the city.
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