What is the best thing about your country and why is your accent affected by your birthplace?

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I can say that the best thing in my country is \"Hallyu\" these day.

>> I can say that the best thing about my country is the \"Hallyu Wave\" these days.

I heard that my people in the world are enthusiastic about Hallyu.

>> I heard that a lot of people in the world are enthusiastic about the hallyu wave.

Especially, people in Asia hope seeing singers, movie stars, and even comedians.
>> More specially the people in the Asia they are hoping to see the singers, movie stars, and even comedians.

Our goods could be famous for the people in the world because of Hallyu.
>> Our products could be more famous for the people in the world because of the Hallyu.

The reason why our accent affected by our birth place is distance from city to other city. It makes people use different accent. 

>> The reason why our accent is affected by our birth place is the distance from city to another city. It makes people use different accents.