What is the best thing about your country and why is your accent affected by your birthplace?
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I think the best thing is Korean Alphabet. In my country because this Alphabet make us more effective when we are writing, speaking, reading, typing and learn other language.
>> I think the best thing about our country is the Korean Alphabets because this Alphabet make\'s more effective when we are writing, speaking, reading, typing and how to learn the other languages.
When we are growing up. We are always influenced by people who are living in the city or value, creed and life cycle.
>> When we are growing up. We are always influenced by the other people who are living in the city or their values, creed and their life cycle.
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