What is the best thing about your hometown?
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The best thing in my hometown is World Cup Stadium and the many park. In the past there was landfill. But beginning to build up World Cup Stadium, there has a many park and become beautiful place. And after World Cup season, there has many cultural facilities and hold a various performance.
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The best thing in my hometown is World Cup Stadium and the many park.
>> The best thing about my hometown is the World Cup Stadium and the parks.
In the past there was landfill.
>> correct!
But beginning to build up World Cup Stadium, there has a many park and become beautiful place.
>> Since the World Cup, it became a beautiful place with a lot of parks.
And after World Cup season, there has many cultural facilities and hold a various performance.
>> After the World Cup season, there has many cultural facilities where various performances are held.
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