What is the best thing about your hometown?

2018-12-04 · 첨삭 강사 Elisha

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My home town is known as a 'Educational City'. There are many universities and schools compare to the size of the city. And It's not crowded because it's a small city. So we know each other very well. I miss my hometown and my old days.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. See you!

~T. Elisha

My home town is known as a \'Educational City\'.

>> My home town is known as an \'Educational City\'.

There are many universities and schools compare to the size of the city.

>> There are many universities and schools in it if comparing to the size of the city.

And It\'s not crowded because it\'s a small city.

>> correct!

or:

>> It\'s not crowded because it\'s a small city.

So we know each other very well.

>> correct!
 I miss my hometown and my old days.

>> correct!

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