What is the best thing about your mother/father?

2019-01-22 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

학생이 쓴 원문

My parents didn\'t mention about my score, even if it was really terrible score. My father and mother was working together , so I felt a little bit depressed when they were working because my younger sister and I needed to stay at home without our parents before they came back home. We didn\'t have enough money when I was young. Despite we were not wealthy, my mother support me very well as my friends who are stable financially was supported from their family. I have a similar characteristic as my mother has, that is calm, shy, and do something without any complaint. Regarding my father, he know very well how to save money, so he taught me how to save electricity, water and even tissues. He was sometimes yelling me, if I didn\'t turn off the light on the living room in the day time. I think that my habits come from my parents and I believe that it helps me a lot during my life time.

강사 첨삭

You were raised well, Sir [이름]!

This might be something you can also pass on to your kids. Have a great day!

~Teacher Eunice


My parents didn\'t mention about my score, even if it was really terrible score.

>>> My parents didn\'t mention about my score, even if it was a really terrible score.

My father and mother was working together , so I felt a little bit depressed when they were working because my younger sister and I needed to stay at home without our parents before they came back home. 

>>>My father and mother were working together, so I felt a little bit depressed when they were working because my younger sister and I needed to stay at home without our parents. 

We didn\'t have enough money when I was young.

>>> correct!

>>> OR: My parents don\'t earn much when I was young.

Despite we were not wealthy, my mother support me very well as my friends who are stable financially was supported from their family.

>>> Despite of being unwealthy, my mother supported me very well as my friends who were stable financially and even supported by their families.   

I have a similar characteristic as my mother has, that is calm, shy, and do something without any complaint.

>>> I have similar characteristics as my mother has, and that is being calm, shy, and doing things without any complaints.

Regarding my father, he know very well how to save money, so he taught me how to save electricity, water and even tissues.

>>> Regarding my father, he knows very well on how to save money, so he taught me how to save electricity, water and even tissues.  

He was sometimes yelling me, if I didn\'t turn off the light on the living room in the day time. 

>>> He was sometimes yelling at me, if I didn\'t turn off the light on the living room in the day time.  

I think that my habits come from my parents and I believe that it helps me a lot during my life time.

>>> I think that my habits came from my parents, and I believe that it helps me a lot in my life time.

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