What is the best thing about your summer vacation?
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My best thing about summer vacation is going travel.
Beacause In Jejudo, I pick Tangerins.
And In Gam Island, I swim in the pool.
And In Dockdo island, I took thotos [My thinck].
These are my best thing about summer vacation.
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T. DON
My best thing about summer vacation is going travel.
Beacause In Jejudo, I pick Tangerins.
And In Gam Island, I swim in the pool.
And In Dockdo island, I took thotos [My thinck].
These are my best thing about summer vacation.
Beacause In Jejudo, I pick Tangerins.
And In Gam Island, I swim in the pool.
And In Dockdo island, I took thotos [My thinck].
These are my best thing about summer vacation.
>> My best thing about summer vacation is traveling. Because In Jejudo, I picked some tangerines. In Gam Island, I swam in the pool. And In Dockdo island, I think I took photos. These are my best things to do this summer vacation.
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