What is the best thing that every happened in your life?

2020-07-21 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear [Name], I think, your question is not for me. I have no case to happen everyday. So, I would like to request something to you. I think, you meet someone by telephone as like me. so I guess you have special case to improve English ability. So if possible, please let me know about successful story of your students. I know my weak point of my English ability. This time, I regret my habitual for English speaking. I want to speak English fluently. so when I was young age, I spoke English without grammer rule. I thought, language only communicate each other. but these days, I have known necessary of grammer. I can speak English fastly, and they understand what I mean. but my position is director. I have to speak English with correct grammer.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]~
My questions are for everybody. The questions I give you are the questions that I usually give my students. Sorry if you think the questions I give is not for you.

Here are your corrections:

Dear [Name],

I think, your question is not for me.
>> CORRECT

I have no case to happen everyday.
>> It doesn\'t happen to me everyday.

So, I would like to request something to you.
>> I\'d like to request something from you.

I think, you meet someone by telephone as like me. so I guess you have special case to improve English ability.
>> If you meet someone through phone just like me, I guess there is a way to improve our English ability.

So if possible, please let me know about successful story of your students.
>> If possible, please tell me about successful stories of your students.

I know my weak point of my English ability.
>> I know my weak points in English.

This time, I regret my habitual for English speaking.
>> I regret my habits in speaking English.

I want to speak English fluently.
>> CORRECT

so when I was young age, I spoke English without grammer rule.
>> When I was young, I speak English without grammar rules.

I thought, language only communicate each other.
>> I thought that language is only used to communicate.

but these days, I have known necessary of grammer.
>> Now I know the importance of grammar.

I can speak English fastly, and they understand what I mean.
>> I can speak English quickly and they understand what I mean.

but my position is director.
>> But, I\'m a director in a company.

I have to speak English with correct grammer.
>> I have to speak in English correctly.

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