What is the best thing that happened to you during the past week?

2020-03-09 · 첨삭 강사 Avery

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The best thing happened in last 7 days is that I got acceptance notice for the 1st stage of the school that I wanted to go. As the outbreak of oronavirus, I am skeptical about whether I can go study abroad or not, however, it is undeniable fact that the letter made my last week. I was given the assignment for the 2nd stage and it requires me to write 12 pages paper. I already finished writing first draft and waiting for the revision session.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Michelle. I appreciate this. In times like this, we need to focus on the positive side. Great job! Go ahead and blow them away with your paper.
Enjoy your afternoon, Mich. See ya! ^^
~T.Avery
The best thing happened in last 7 days is that I got acceptance notice for the 1st stage of the school that I wanted to go.
>> The best thing that happened in the last 7 days is that I got an acceptance notice for the 1st stage of the school that I wanted to go to.
As the outbreak of oronavirus, I am skeptical about whether I can go study abroad or not, however, it is undeniable fact that the letter made my last week. 
>> CORRECT
I was given the assignment for the 2nd stage and it requires me to write 12 pages paper. 
>> CORRECT
I already finished writing first draft and waiting for the revision session. 
>> I already finished writing the first draft and I\'m currently waiting for the revision session. 

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