What is the best thing that has ever happened to you?
학생이 쓴 원문
There are a lot of issues that I satisfied during my life. However, as recent time, the best thing that happened to me is that my Korean title has been changed from Sawon to Deri, effective from 1st July, which is tomorrow!
As I already mentioned several time in our speaking class, my working scope wasn\'t stable and hard to cover all of my work. Going through such hard times, promotion seemed a gift to me and also I got a recommendation for new job position in same company within my promotion. Thus, my interview will be arranged next week by HR team and result will be finalized 1~2 days afterwards. If my interview is success, then my English title will be changed and my annual income including my benefits and work scopes will be better! Hope I can have one more jump in my work! : )
강사 첨삭
CONGRATULATIONS my dear!! I am so happy for you! ^_^
.There are a lot of issues that I satisfied during my life.
>> There are a lot of issues that I have faced during my lifetime.
However, as recent time, the best thing that happened to me is that my Korean title has been changed from Sawon to Deri, effective from 1st July, which is tomorrow!
>> However, recently, the best thing that happened to me is that my Korean title has been changed from Sawon to Deri, effective from 1st July, which is tomorrow!
As I already mentioned several time in our speaking class, my working scope wasn\'t stable and hard to cover all of my work.
>> As I already mentioned several times in our speaking class, my working scope wasn\'t stable and I had a hard time covering all of my work.
Going through such hard times, promotion seemed a gift to me and also I got a recommendation for new job position in same company within my promotion.
>> Going through such hard times, promotion seemed to be a gift to me, and I also got a recommendation for a new job position in the same company within my promotion.
Thus, my interview will be arranged next week by HR team and result will be finalized 1~2 days afterwards.
>> Thus, my interview will be arranged next week by the HR team and the result will be finalized 1~2 days afterwards.
If my interview is success, then my English title will be changed and my annual income including my benefits and work scopes will be better!
>> If my interview is successful, then my English title will be changed and my annual income including my benefits and work scopes will be better!
Hope I can have one more jump in my work! : )
>> Hope I can have one more jump in my work! : )
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