What is the best transport that you have tried from another country?
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I take the airplane if another country is too far. If it is close country, I like to use the ship. People who lives in Korea are no way going to other countries. Because Korea has sea of 3 ways.
The airplane is best transport. But It is too expensive. If it has a more cheaper price, it is perfect.
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Here are some things to consider:
1. I take the airplane if another country is too far.
>>I take an airplane if another country is too far.
2. If it is close country, I like to use the ship.
>>If it is a close country, I like to use the ship.
3. People who lives in Korea are no way going to other countries. Because Korea has sea of 3 ways.
>>People who live in Korea have other ways in going to other countries.
4. The airplane is best transport. But It is too expensive.
>>The airplane is the best transport, but it is too expensive.
5. If it has a more cheaper price, it is perfect.
>>If it has a cheaper price, it is perfect.
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