What is the best travel experience you can imagine?

I think that the best travel is realized when we don\'t have any stress and have some funny memory. Actually, later one is more important. If there\'re some episode in trip and the episode is memorable, when I meet travel friends we talked about the trip every our drinking party. For example, I went Jeju-island with my best friend after CSAT at 19. The most memorable episode is that we lost our baggage on the bus, called to police station, and the bus driver brought it to us next morning. We can\'t forgot that day. I\'m sorry to late submission T-T... I forgot it..

Hi! You wrote a very interesting and personal answer, and I really enjoyed reading about your Jeju Island trip. Your story was fun and engaging, and you included a clear example that makes your answer memorable. Just be careful with small grammar points, like using “the latter,” correct verb forms (“can’t forget”), and prepositions (“went to Jeju Island”). Also, try to connect sentences smoothly for even better flow. Overall, your writing is lively and shows your personality. Great work!

-Teacher Wela 

I think that the best travel is realized when we don\'t have any stress and have some funny memory.

>> I think the best travel experience happens when we are free from stress and create fun memories.

Actually, later one is more important.

>> Actually, the latter is more important.

If there\'re some episode in trip and the episode is memorable, when I meet travel friends we talked about the trip every our drinking party.

>> If there is a memorable episode during a trip, I often talk about it with my travel friends at our drinking parties.

For example, I went Jeju-island with my best friend after CSAT at 19.

>> For example, I went to Jeju Island with my best friend after the CSAT when I was 19.

The most memorable episode is that we lost our baggage on the bus, called to police station, and the bus driver brought it to us next morning.

>> The most memorable episode is that we lost our baggage on the bus, called the police station, and the bus driver brought it back to us the next morning.

We can\'t forgot that day.

>> We can’t forget that day.

I\'m sorry to late submission.. I forgot it..

>> I’m sorry for the late submission. I forgot to submit it.