What is the best way for parents to teach responsibility to children?
학생이 쓴 원문
I believe that the best way to teach responsibility is less the instruction to children.
It\'s related to the independence. These days many parents tend to overprotect and control their children.
But too much control steal the chance which their kids can choose.
They need to decide themselves and take responsibility if that decision is kind of wrong.
That way, they can learn what\'s important and what\'s wrong for their own decision.
강사 첨삭
I believe that the best way to teach responsibility is less the instruction to children.
>> I believe the best way to teach responsibility is by giving children fewer instructions.
It\'s related to the independence. These days many parents tend to overprotect and control their children.
>> It is related to independence. These days, many parents tend to overprotect and control their children.
But too much control steal the chance which their kids can choose.
>> But too much control takes away the chance for children to make their own choices.
They need to decide themselves and take responsibility if that decision is kind of wrong.
>> They need to make their own decisions and take responsibility, even if those decisions turn out to be wrong.
That way, they can learn what\'s important and what\'s wrong for their own decision.
>> That way, they can learn what is important and what is not through their own decisions.
OR >> Through their choices, they learn the difference between right and wrong.
Thank you for taking the time to answer this essay, Jay!
Thank you for taking the time to answer this essay, Jay!
I totally agree with you. You can only truly learn accountability by doing things yourself.
See you in a bit!
- Teacher Elly~^^
See you in a bit!
- Teacher Elly~^^
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