What is the best way for police to keep neighborhoods safe?

2022-11-16 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

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I think the police need some plans that make criminals be afraid of doing crime. I think preventing is the best way to keep neighborhoods safe. So we need to make criminals not to do crime before they do it. Because of this reason, I think we need to make criminals be scared of doing crime. And also do a lot of campaigns that can help preventing crime.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thanks for the effort today. See you tomorrow! ^^

~~Teacher Kate

I think the police need some plans that make criminals be afraid of doing crime.

>>I think the police need some plans that would make criminals be afraid of doing crime.
I think preventing is the best way to keep neighborhoods safe.

>>CORRECT!
So we need to make criminals not to do crime before they do it.

>>So we need to stop criminals from committing crime before they do it.
Because of this reason, I think we need to make criminals be scared of doing crime.

>>CORRECT!
And also do a lot of campaigns that can help preventing crime.

>>And also make a lot of campaigns that can help prevent crime.

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