What is the best way to avoid misunderstanding within the family?
학생이 쓴 원문
Family is a fundamental society before people get face to a real world.
Thus, We should be polite to our family members even if they are kids.
Being polite make people to avoid misunderstanding in the family.
When people enoughly explain their thoughts and willings to someone, there will reduce a  misunderstanding.
For me, I am trying to discuss with my family during having dinner. While we discuss, we can know well other\'s opinions and understand the situations which they had.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Young Won!
I totally agree that an open communication always fosters better relationship between and amongst family members.
We also try to respect their privacy and give them space and time to grow. Most of all, respect to everyone is a must all the time.
Thanks for your two cents on this topic, see you in an hour in class~
-T. Donna =)
>> Family is the fundamental foundation of society before people get to face the real world.
Thus, We should be polite to our family members even if they are kids.
>> Correct!
Or>> Thus, we should be...
Being polite make people to avoid misunderstanding in the family.
>> Being polite makes people avoid misunderstanding in the family.
When people enoughly explain their thoughts and willings to someone, there will reduce a  misunderstanding.
>> When explain their thoughts well and are willing to be humble to someone, there will reduced anger and misunderstanding.
For me, I am trying to discuss with my family during having dinner. While we discuss, we can know well other\'s opinions and understand the situations which they had.
For me, I am trying to discuss with my family during having dinner. While we discuss, we can know well other\'s opinions and understand the situations which they had.
>> For me, I am trying to discuss with my family during dinner. While we discuss, we can know well about other\'s opinions and understand the situation which they have.
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