What is the best way to cope with stress?
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The best way to cope with stress is playing games. Games make people feel excited and happy. Also, people can play games with friends, so they can cope stress together. I think that playing games is the best way to cope stress.
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The best way to cope with stress is playing games.
>> The best way to cope with stress is by playing games.
>> or: I cope with stress by playing video games.
Games make people feel excited and happy.
>> correct
Also, people can play games with friends, so they can cope stress together.
>> Also, people can play games with friends, so they can cope with stress together.
I think that playing games is the best way to cope stress.
>> I think that playing games is the best way to cope with stress. [Note the expression \'cope with stress\'.]
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