What is the best way to fully enjoy your life in the metropolitan of Seoul?
학생이 쓴 원문
There is a way for me to fully enjoy my life in the metropolitan of Seoul.
Because it is not far from my house in there, so I often go to Soul to see my friends.
When I meet them, we watch the play in the theater.
After that we go to nice restaurant and we have eat and drink what each person like.
On special days,
I stay at hotel with my husband while we have delicious food and enjoy the beautiful scenery around there.
강사 첨삭
I am so happy to know your experiences, Jullia. May you always have time to spend with your loved ones.-Faith-
There is a way for me to fully enjoy my life in the metropolitan of Seoul. Because it is not far from my house in there, so I often go to Soul to see my friends.>> There is a way for me to fully enjoy my life in the metropolitan of Seoul because it is not far from my house, so I often go there to see my friends.
When I meet them, we watch the play in the theater.
>> When I meet them, we watch a play in the theater.
After that we go to nice restaurant and we have eat and drink what each person like.
>> After that, we go to a nice restaurant, and we eat and drink what each person likes.
On special days, I stay at hotel with my husband while we have delicious food and enjoy the beautiful scenery around there.
After that we go to nice restaurant and we have eat and drink what each person like.
>> After that, we go to a nice restaurant, and we eat and drink what each person likes.
On special days, I stay at hotel with my husband while we have delicious food and enjoy the beautiful scenery around there.
>> On special days, I stay at a hotel with my husband while we eat delicious food and enjoy the beautiful scenery around the place.
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