What is the best way to help a friend with an eating disorder?(ANSWER)
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Hello, [이름]!
The sky is so gloomy in my city and I\'m sad about it.
I hope tomorrow would be sunnier. kkk.
Thanks for writing this essay.
I\'m happy to know that none of your friends has an eating disorder.
You\'re lucky!
I agree that supporting your friends emotionally and mentally are the best ways to help.
See you again tomorrow.
Have a wonderful evening! :*
~Teacher Charry ^^
I think going to the hospital with friend is the best way to help.
>> I think going to the hospital with that friend is the best way to help.
I think people can be treated and better if tjey get any diseases.
>> [Do you mean]: I think people can get a better treatment for their disease if they do it that way.
Also, I think it is good way to not provide ant causes.
>> Also, I think it is good not to provide any other causes.
And, isn\'t it a good idea to encourage your friend and talk to them?
>> In addition, isn\'t it a good idea to encourage your friend and talk to him/her?
The best thing is... I don\'t have such friends like that.
>> The best thing is that, I don\'t have such friends like that.
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