What is the best way to help people with disability?
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you always try to help people who are disabled?
My answer is absolutely \'No\'.
People with disability aren\'t weak, nor pitiful and poor.
If we help them unconditionally just because they are disabled, they won’t be able to anything in future.
So we have to really consider whether need to help them before we help them.
강사 첨삭
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I hope you are ready for your first day back at school.
I wish you all the luck.
Have a great day tomorrow.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
My answer is absolutely \'No\'.
>> My answer is absolutely not.
People with disability aren\'t weak, nor pitiful and poor.
People with disability aren\'t weak, nor pitiful and poor.
>> Correct
If we help them unconditionally just because they are disabled, they won’t be able to anything in future.
If we help them unconditionally just because they are disabled, they won’t be able to anything in future.
>> If we help them unconditionally just because they are disabled, they won’t be able to do anything in future.
So we have to really consider whether need to help them before we help them.
So we have to really consider whether need to help them before we help them.
>> So we have to really consider whether we need to help them before we help them.
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