What is the best way to help someone who is depressed?

2018-07-04 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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I think hearing is most important way to comport someone who has depression. When I was deressed, I usally talk about my situation to someone. If I share my bad feelings with my family or friends,I feel better. And second of all, if someone is depressed, I try to make someone fun. I'm quiet good at make people draw a laugh.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Jane!

I ag[이름] with you that hearing or listening to someone who is depressed is the best way.
I think we all experienced being depressed some time in our lives.
It\'s how we cope up with it that matters.
See you!

_Teacher Dianne ^^

I think hearing is most important way to comport someone who has depression.
>> I think listening is the most important way to comfort someone who has depression.
When I was deressed, I usally talk about my situation to someone.
>> When I was depressed, I usually talked about my situation to someone. 
If I share my bad feelings with my family or friends, I feel better.
>> correct
And second of all, if someone is depressed, I try to make someone fun.
>> 
And second of all, if someone is depressed, I try to make that someone have fun.
I\'m quiet good at make people draw a laugh.
>> I\'m quite good at making people laugh. 

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