What is the best way to keep your spouse happy in the marriage?
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In our society, many women seek happiness from their husbands in their marriage. They tend to expect and rely on their men to be happy. Women expect their husbands to be sweet at home, to have small talks a lot over a glass of wine in the evening regardless how long day he had at work, to do house chores, to go on a trip on the weekends, to earn a lot of money, to express their love, to be a good dad for their children, to take a walk hand in hand with her when going out, and so on. Above all, their primary wish is to feel loved all the time. It sounds easy. From men’s perspective, they want to feel loved as well. Love should be mutual. One sided love won’t last long. They want a rest at home. Sometimes Love falls low on one side or the other. But Love on both sides of the partnership will provide for the love and caring that we all need. Love is the caring for each other that two people can express and care for each other. To be treated like a queen, treat your man like a king.
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Happy fourth day of the week Sir [이름]!
What a lovely essay! Hihihi!
Your sentences were awesome!
You elaborated it too. ^^ It is really important to have a give and take relationship.
Thanks for your ideas that you shared in writing.
Talk to you tonight. Take Care.
Teacher Nina
In our society, many women seek happiness from their husbands in their marriage.
>> Correct!
They tend to expect and rely on their men to be happy.
>> Correct!
Women expect their husbands to be sweet at home, to have small talks a lot over a glass of wine in the evening regardless how long day he had at work, to do house chores, to go on a trip on the weekends, to earn a lot of money, to express their love, to be a good dad for their children, to take a walk hand in hand with her when going out, and so on.
>> Correct!
Above all, their primary wish is to feel loved all the time.
>> Correct!
It sounds easy.
>> Correct!
From men’s perspective, they want to feel loved as well.
>> Correct!
>> OR: From men\'s perspective, they also want to be loved.
Love should be mutual.
>> Correct!
One sided love won’t last long.
>> Correct!
They want a rest at home.
>> They want to rest at home.
Sometimes Love falls low on one side or the other.
>> Correct!
But Love on both sides of the partnership will provide for the love and caring that we all need.
>> Correct!
Love is the caring for each other that two people can express and care for each other.
>> Love is that two people express their love and care for each other.
>> OR: Love is caring for each other.
To be treated like a queen, treat your man like a king.
>> Correct!
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