What is the best way to spend the weekend for you?
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about 2 years ago, one of the personal test, called MBTI was very popular among people. if i describe my personality with it, especially last letter \"P\" and \"J\", I am a planned person but my plan is always changable. So I make a lot of plans to do during weekend until friday. But on that day, I change my mind that I would hang out with my friends and stay at home whole day without thinking. I did same thing last weekend again. My friend asked me to hang out on Sunday. I gently rejected becasue I would have a late sleep with pajamas, not making up. Resting is good for the health but I sometimes feel it waste time. I have a regret at very late night. I don\'t know what is my problem.
so in my opinion, the best way to spend the weekend is outdoor activiting, even my body feel tired.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Jenny!
about 2 years ago, one of the personal test, called MBTI was very popular among people.
>>> About 2 years ago, one of the personality tests called MBTI was very popular among people.
if i describe my personality with it, especially last letter \"P\" and \"J\", I am a planned person but my plan is always changable.
>>> If I describe my personality with it, especially the last letters \"P\" and \"J\", I am a planned person but my plan is always changeable.
So I make a lot of plans to do during weekend until friday.
>>> So I make a lot of plans to do during the weekend until Friday.
But on that day, I change my mind that I would hang out with my friends and stay at home whole day without thinking.
>>> But on that day, I change my mind on hanging out with my friends and stay at home the whole day instead without any thoughts.
I did same thing last weekend again.
>>> I did the same thing last weekend again.
My friend asked me to hang out on Sunday.
>>> correct
I gently rejected becasue I would have a late sleep with pajamas, not making up.
>>> I gently rejected because I would have to sleep late with pajamas and not having any make up.
Resting is good for the health but I sometimes feel it waste time.
>>> Resting is good for the health but I sometimes feel it is a waste of time.
I have a regret at very late night.
>>> correct
I don\'t know what is my problem.
>>> correct
so in my opinion, the best way to spend the weekend is outdoor activiting, even my body feel tired.
>>> So in my opinion, the best way to spend the weekend is do outdoor activities, even if my body feels tired.
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