What is the best way to stay healthy?
학생이 쓴 원문
Well, I guess that it\'s working out outside my place. Also, excerci[이름]g with acquaintances can get me motivatied. But I\'ve never tried to go a gym, because I don\'t need to work out at there. :)
강사 첨삭
Hi Eric,
I appreciate you for submitting your homework and for sharing your thoughts about it. You did so well. Stay healthy! ^^
~ Teacher Gina
Well, I guess that it\'s working out outside my place. Also, excerci[이름]g with acquaintances can get me motivatied. But I\'ve never tried to go a gym, because I don\'t need to work out at there. :)
>> Well, I guess that it\'s working out outside my place. Also, exerci[이름]g with acquaintances can get me motivated. But I\'ve never tried to go to a gym because I don\'t need to work out there. :)
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