What is the biggest advantage and disadvantage of Freedom of expression
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The biggest advantage of freedom of expression is to share the informations (information) without discrimination.
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>> The biggest advantage of the freedom of expression is being able to share information without discrimination.
In the past, the suppression of expression was used in order to control the social class by limiting the circulation of informations (information).
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When we don\'t have enough information on certain fact or on others\' opinions, it is easy to make misunderstanding and confusion.
>> When we don\'t have enough information on a certain fact or on others\' opinions, it is easy to have misunderstanding and confusion.
The thing we have a way to express ourselves is important for the better communication.
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On the other hand, the freedom of expression can result the vicious impact of the freedom of others.
>> On the other hand, the freedom of expression can result to vicious impact on the freedom of others.
Since every comments can be exposed without any censoring, it\'s hard to verify what is correct or not.
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It\'s very often to harm someone before he or she defend him/herself.
>> often times, it\'s very easy to harm someone before he or she defends him/herself.
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