What is the biggest apology you’ve ever had to give? How did you feel while you were giving it, befo
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The weather is still cold here. I envy the weather in Philippine for winter only.
I was surprised you are using the belt for your nephew education. I know it must be a good cane for them.^^
What is the biggest apology you’ve ever had to give? How did you feel while you were giving it, beforehand and afterward?
I don\'t remember what I did something wrong and never remember that I gave anyone my apology since I had a job here.
I have argued with our chef for some problems a year ago. I shouted at him because he can not take the reservation owing to manpower lack. So I said you are the chef and have the responsibilities for handling the problem but what can you do for that?
I gave the apology to the kitchen employees because of my shout of anger. I still can\'t understand his mind.
The problem was reported to the general manager. Anyway the reservation was handled by ourselves without any manpower of kitchen department.
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Happy Wednesday, Han!~
I smiled when I read the \"belt\" part, hahaha... I might sounded off that time but I guess I practice the traditional way. (^.^\") I feel like I have to defend myself about what I said regarding this HAHAHA!!! Anyway, whenever you talk about your work the only problem you mention is the chef... nothing else, I must say that it is consistent, :D
-Chammy
The weather is still cold here. I envy the weather in Philippine for winter only.
>>The weather is still cold here. I envy the weather in the Philippines for winter only.
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>>I envy the weather in the Philippines just during the winter.
I was surprised you are using the belt for your nephew education. I know it must be a good cane for them.^^
>>I was surprised you are using the belt for your nephew\'s education. I know it must be a good cane for them.^^
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>>I was surprised you use a belt to discipline your nephew, but I must say that a cane seemed to be more appropriate for them.^^
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>> I was shocked when you told me you are using a belt to discipline your nephew. I must say a cane is better for them.^^
I don\'t remember what I did something wrong and never remember that I gave anyone my apology since I had a job here.
I don\'t remember what I did something wrong and never remember that I gave anyone my apology since I had a job here.
>> Correct
I have argued with our chef for some problems a year ago. I shouted at him because he can not take the reservation owing to manpower lack.
I have argued with our chef for some problems a year ago. I shouted at him because he can not take the reservation owing to manpower lack.
>>I argued with our chef about some problems a year ago. I shouted at him because he could not take the reservation owing to a lack of manpower.
So I said you are the chef and have the responsibilities for handling the problem but what can you do for that?
>> Correct
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>>So I told him that he is the chef and is responsible for dealing with the problem, so what could he do about that?
I gave the apology to the kitchen employees because of my shout of anger. I still can\'t understand his mind.
>>I gave an apology to the kitchen employees because I shouted in anger. I still can\'t understand his mind.
The problem was reported to the general manager. Anyway the reservation was handled by ourselves without any manpower of kitchen department.
>>The problem was reported to the general manager. Anyway, the reservation was handled by ourselves without any manpower from the kitchen department.
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>> The problem was reported to the general manager. Anyway, we handled the reservation without any help from the kitchen department.
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