what is the biggest challenge to young people today?
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hi alice!
How was your weenkend?
I met my freind and saw a movie.
There are enough time to do my homework this weekend but, Now I'm doing in lazing (I'm not sure this expression right?..)
anyway cramming for something is not a good idea.
I'm afraid that I understood well today's homework. I think that 'The meaning of'The bigget challenge to young peole' is just common rised source of trouble.
first of all getting a job is the most important to them.
As you know, many of young people study English so that they can get a better job.
these fact makes the young people to build a Spec.
do you know what is the 'Spec'?
Spec is the word showed up these day. Meaning is the score of the how the people have a good qualification about the getting a job. Like the TOEIC score, certificate, something awarded..
But I want to tell them do a varius experience that they only can do in young.
강사 첨삭
Hello There!Thanks so much for sending in your homework.
I made some corrections below so you can go ahead and practice them for your improvement.
Hmm, I am not really sure about the word \'Spec\'. What I know about this, it refers to a short term for \'specifications\' as of mobile phones, computers or software programs.
Can you tell me more about this later in class? I appreciate it.^^
Anyway, it is true that getting a job among the young is the most challenging thing to them.
Especially now that we are in a very competitive world. It\'s like a dog-eat-dog race.
Anyway, you have such a very bright thinking. :)
Take Care! See you later!^^
~ Teacher Alice
hi alice!
>>Hi Alice!How was your weenkend?>>How was your weekend?
I met my freind and saw a movie.>>I met with my friend and we went to see a movie.
There are enough time to do my homework this weekend but, Now I\'m doing in lazing
>>There is enough time to do my homework this weekend but now I\'m feeling lazy.
(I\'m not sure this expression right?..)
>>I\'m not sure about this expression.
>> OR: I\'m not sure if this expression is right. . .
>> Is this expression right?
Anyway, cramming for something is not a good idea.>>Correct!
I\'m afraid that I understood well today\'s homework.
>> I\'m afraid I did not understand today\'s homework.
I think that \'The meaning of\'The bigget challenge to young peole\' is just common rised source of trouble.
>>I think that the meaning of \"The biggest challenge to young people\" is just a common source of troubles.First of all, getting a job is the most important to them.
>>First of all, getting a job is the most important thing to them.As you know, many of young people study English so that they can get a better job.
>>As you know, many young people study English so they can get a better job.these fact makes the young people to build a Spec.
>>This fact makes young people build their \"Spec\".do you know what is the \'Spec\'?
>>Do you know what \"Spec\" means?Spec is the word showed up these day.>>\"Spec\" is the word that showed up this day.
Meaning is the score of the how the people have a good qualification about the getting a job.
>>It is the score given to people for their good qualifications for getting a job.
Like the TOEIC score, certificate, something awarded..>>Like the TOEIC score, certificate or something awarded..But I want to tell them do a varius experience that they only can do in young.
>>But I want to tell them to dwell on various experiences that they can only do while they are young.
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