what is the biggest challenge to young people today?

2013-01-07 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

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hi alice! How was your weenkend? I met my freind and saw a movie. There are enough time to do my homework this weekend but, Now I'm doing in lazing (I'm not sure this expression right?..) anyway cramming for something is not a good idea. I'm afraid that I understood well today's homework. I think that 'The meaning of'The bigget challenge to young peole' is just common rised source of trouble. first of all getting a job is the most important to them. As you know, many of young people study English so that they can get a better job. these fact makes the young people to build a Spec. do you know what is the 'Spec'? Spec is the word showed up these day. Meaning is the score of the how the people have a good qualification about the getting a job. Like the TOEIC score, certificate, something awarded.. But I want to tell them do a varius experience that they only can do in young.

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Hello There!Thanks so much for sending in your homework. I made some corrections below so you can go ahead and practice them for your improvement. Hmm, I am not really sure about the word \'Spec\'. What I know about this, it refers to a short term for \'specifications\' as of mobile phones, computers or software programs. Can you tell me more about this later in class? I appreciate it.^^ Anyway, it is true that getting a job among the young is the most challenging thing to them. Especially now that we are in a very competitive world. It\'s like a dog-eat-dog race. Anyway, you have such a very bright thinking. :) Take Care! See you later!^^ ~ Teacher Alice hi alice! >>Hi Alice!How was your weenkend?>>How was your weekend? I met my freind and saw a movie.>>I met with my friend and we went to see a movie. There are enough time to do my homework this weekend but, Now I\'m doing in lazing >>There is enough time to do my homework this weekend but now I\'m feeling lazy.  (I\'m not sure this expression right?..) >>I\'m not sure about this expression. >> OR: I\'m not sure if this expression is right. . . >> Is this expression right? Anyway, cramming for something is not a good idea.>>Correct! I\'m afraid that I understood well today\'s homework. >> I\'m afraid I did not understand today\'s homework. I think that \'The meaning of\'The bigget challenge to young peole\' is just common rised source of trouble. >>I think that the meaning of \"The biggest challenge to young people\" is just a common source of troubles.First of all, getting a job is the most important to them. >>First of all, getting a job is the most important thing to them.As you know, many of young people study English so that they can get a better job. >>As you know, many young people study English so they can get a better job.these fact makes the young people to build a Spec. >>This fact makes young people build their \"Spec\".do you know what is the \'Spec\'? >>Do you know what \"Spec\" means?Spec is the word showed up these day.>>\"Spec\" is the word that showed up this day.  Meaning is the score of the how the people have a good qualification about the getting a job. >>It is the score given to people for their good qualifications for getting a job. Like the TOEIC score, certificate, something awarded..>>Like the TOEIC score, certificate or something awarded..But I want to tell them do a varius experience that they only can do in young. >>But I want to tell them to dwell on various experiences that they can only do while they are young.

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