What is the biggest change this world needs?
학생이 쓴 원문
Perhaps the biggest change is the development of technology. Times progress and technology develop, people\'s lives seem to be more convenient and want a higher level of technology. In addition, the power of technology is the standard for determining the national power of the country in the future.
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Hi Sarah! This is actually true. Technology evolves day by day. As generations changes, it adapts to it very quicly.
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Perhaps the biggest change is the development of technology.
>>CORRECT
Times progress and technology develop, people\'s lives seem to be more convenient and want a higher level of technology.
>>As time progresses, technology develops. People\'s lives seem to be more convenient and we demand more advanced technology.
In addition, the power of technology is the standard for determining the national power of the country in the future.
>>CORRECT
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