What is the biggest change you\'ve noticed in Korea for the past 5 years?
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Hi, [이름]! ^^
Wow! I think your government has a good program regarding family assistance.
However, you are also correct, it isn\'t the best solution, but at least it is helpful in some ways.
I hope they find better ways to address the situation at hand. ^^
Take care, and I hope to have a chat with you again someday!
~~t. Ally
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There are a lot of changes here because our president has changed.
>> There are a lot of changes here because we have a new president now.
I can tell the public welfare about the low birth rate is the biggest change that I have noticed.
>> In my opinion, the public welfare about the low birth rate is the biggest change that I have noticed.
The government give money to mothers when they are pregnant and raising a kid.
>> The government gives money to mothers when they are pregnant and raising kids.
For example, I got 500 thousand won when I was pregnant so that I could have a ultrasound to check the health of my fetus.
>> For example, I got 500,000 won when I was pregnant so that I could have an ultrasound to check the health of my fetus.
I also have been paid to raise my kid about 200 thousand won per months.
>> I have also been paid 200,000 won per month to raise my kid.
I could buy milk, clothes, toys and books for my baby.
>> CORRECT!
I don\'t think it is the best solution to the low birth rate problem but I think it is helpful in some ways.
>> I don\'t think it\'s the best solution for the low birth rate problem, but I think it is helpful in some ways.
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