What is the biggest health problem in the world today?
학생이 쓴 원문
What is the biggest health problem in the world today?
I believe that it is over eating and less excersing.
If we are considering that our health is important, we should do these things in reverse.
Less eating and much excersice than now.
I know that it is too hard to me
becacue we are human who has much fails.
강사 첨삭
I believe that it is over eating and less excersing.
>> I believe that it is overeating and exercising less.
If we are considering that our health is important, we should do these things in reverse.
>> If we think that health is important, we should do the opposite.
>> I believe that it is overeating and exercising less.
If we are considering that our health is important, we should do these things in reverse.
>> If we think that health is important, we should do the opposite.
Less eating and much excersice than now.
>> We should eat less and exercise more than we do now.
>> We should eat less and exercise more than we do now.
I know that it is too hard to me becacue we are human who has much fails.
>> I know that it is too hard for me because we are humans who make many mistakes.
Yes, you are right. We are only human, so there are days when we can do things perfectly and days when we cannot.
On those days, don’t be too hard on yourself. You can try again tomorrow.^^
- Elly~
On those days, don’t be too hard on yourself. You can try again tomorrow.^^
- Elly~
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