"What is the biggest sacrifice you have made?"
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강사 첨삭
Hi Jane! I love the way you think. And I love that you feel this way. Keep it up! Your family is so blessed to have you!
I\'ve been thinking about my life since I checked today\'s homework.
>>I\'ve been contemplating about my life since I\'ve checked today\'s homework.
I didn\'t sacrifice that much in my whole life.
>>I haven\'t made any sacrifices in my whole life.
I live very normal life, my family is very harmonius and my love life is very stable.
>>I live a very normal life. My family is very peaceful and my love life is stable.
It means there\'s no dramatical events in my life.
>>It means there\'s no drama in my life.
But if there\'s something bad event occurs to my family, I\'m sure I\'ll
sacrifice for them.
>>But if something bad happens, I am sure that I will make a sacrifice for them.
You know.. family is the reason of my exist.
>>You know, my family is the reason of my existence.
By my parents favor, I grow up without any difficults and poverty.
>>Because of my parents, I grew up without any difficulties or poverty.
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