"What is the biggest sacrifice you have made?"

2018-06-27 · 첨삭 강사 Asia

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I've been thinking about my life since I checked today's homework. I didn't sacrifice that much in my whole life. I live very normal life, my family is very harmonius and my love life is very stable. It means there's no dramatical events in my life. But if there's something bad event occurs to my family, I'm sure I'll sacrifice for them. You know.. family is the reason of my exist. By my parents favor, I grow up without any difficults and poverty.

강사 첨삭

Hi Jane! I love the way you think. And I love that you feel this way. Keep it up! Your family is so blessed to have you!    

I\'ve been thinking about my life since I checked today\'s homework.

>>I\'ve been contemplating about my life since I\'ve checked today\'s homework.
 I didn\'t sacrifice that much in my whole life.

>>I haven\'t made any sacrifices in my whole life.
 I live very normal life, my family is very harmonius and my love life is very stable. 

>>I live a very normal life. My family is very peaceful and my love life is stable.
 It means there\'s no dramatical events in my life.

>>It means there\'s no drama in my life.
 But if there\'s something bad event occurs to my family, I\'m sure I\'ll
sacrifice for them. 

>>But if something bad happens, I am sure that I will make a sacrifice for them.
 You know.. family is the reason of my exist. 

>>You know, my family is the reason of my existence.
 By my parents favor, I grow up without any difficults and poverty.

>>Because of my parents, I grew up without any difficulties or poverty.

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