What is the coldest month in your country? What temperature does it drop to?
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December and January are cold month in Korea.
Especially, January is the coldest month of the year.
In January, the temperature is getting down until minus 15 to 20 degree celsius.
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December and January are cold month in Korea.
>> December and January are the coldest months in Korea.
Especially, January is the coldest month of the year.
>> January is the coldest month of the year.
In January, the temperature is getting down until minus 15 to 20 degree celsius.
>> In January, the temperature goes down until minus 15 to 20 degree Celsius.
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