What is the connection between a person\'s lifestyle and the duration of his life?
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It\'s hard to answer. I think that It\'s important what kind of lifestyle that a person has. Example, If you\'re lazy in your lifestyle, I don\'t think your life is meaningful.
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Exactly, [이름]! For us to have a meaningful life, we need to work and do what we are passionate about. See you!-Faith-
It\'s hard to answer. >> CORRECT
I think that It\'s important what kind of lifestyle that a person has.
>> I think that it\'s important what kind of lifestyle that a person has.
OR I think the lifestyle of a person really matters.
Example, If you\'re lazy in your lifestyle, I don\'t think your life is meaningful.
>> For example, if you\'re lazy in your lifestyle, I don\'t think your life is meaningful.
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