what is the definition of success.

It is a subjective thing whether your life is success or not. I think the success from one's mind in one's life. We can say that is success to someone achieve a goal that looked worthy cause. It doesn't matter what is honor, fortunes and so on. people can get a joy and achievment from it. that's enough. But, impotant thing is that sould be shared the other peole. that joy is not only one's own thing but also everyone.

Hello there! Thank your for sharing your thoughts about your definition on success in this composition. I agree with you. When one achieves suuccess and happiness, he must also learn how to share it to other people. I think giving happiness to everyone means being successful in a human\'s life.  Anyway, please review the corrections I made for you below. See you later, [이름]! --- Teacher Alice ^^ ---- It is a subjective thing whether your life is success or not.>> It is a subjective thing whether your life is successful or not.I think the success from one\'s mind in one\'s life. >> I think that success of one\'s life is in one\'s mind.We can say that is success to someone achieve a goal that looked worthy cause.>> We can say that someone is successful when he or she achieved a goal that is worthy of its cause.It doesn\'t matter what is honor, fortunes and so on.>> It doesn\'t matter if it\'s honor, fortune, or others.people can get a joy and achievment from it. >> People can have joy and achievement from it. that\'s enough.>> Correct.But, impotant thing is that sould be shared the other peole.>> But the important thing is that it should be shared to other people.that joy is not only one\'s own thing but also everyone. >> That joy is not only for one\'s own thing but also for everyone.