What is the difference between families 30 years ago and today?
학생이 쓴 원문
What is the difference between families 30 years ago and today?
30 years ago was they are really big family but this day we changed small family.
Also 30 years ago we had many our Family gathering and we had to attend necessary but this day we don’t have to attend.
강사 첨삭
Hi Mun!
This is true in the Korean society today. People have become busier and mobile and cannot attend family gatherings due to work or school. Others just opt not to.
Anyway, as the Korean family becomes one-child or childless, then there would be a lot of changes in the future.
Thank you very much for your homework and see you next week!
-T. Donna =)
>> Thirty years ago, there were really big families but this day, we have changed into small families.
Also 30 years ago we had many our Family gathering and we had to attend necessary but this day we don’t have to attend.
>> Also 30 years ago, we had many family gatherings and we had to attend it necessarily. But this day, we don’t have to attend some anymore.
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