What is the difference between friendship and \'kinship\' (blood relatives)?
학생이 쓴 원문
I see relatives 3 or 4 times a year but sometimes they feel closer than most friends. Especially aunts, uncles and grandparents. I think that\'s because I know they will like me. Our strong relationship as a family relaxes me and helps to believe them. But at the same time, I know almost nothing about my relatives while I know what my friends ate yesterday. So I know my friends better but I can believe my relatives much easily.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] [이름]!
Thanks for writing your homework.
I like how you mentioned how friendship and family relationships are different but equally important.
Have a great day! See you on our next class. ^^
-T.Jhozel
I see relatives 3 or 4 times a year but sometimes they feel closer than most friends.
>> Correct!
OR: I see my relatives three or four times a year, but they feel closer than most of my friends.
Especially aunts, uncles and grandparents. I think that\'s because I know they will like me.
>> Correct!
OR: Especially aunts, uncles, and grandparents. I believe this is because I am confident that they will like me.
Our strong relationship as a family relaxes me and helps to believe them.
>> Correct!
OR: It calms me down and makes it easier for me to trust them because of our close family bond.
But at the same time, I know almost nothing about my relatives while I know what my friends ate yesterday.
>> Correct!
OR: But at the same time, I know almost nothing about my relatives, while I know what my friends ate yesterday.
So I know my friends better but I can believe my relatives much easily.
>> Correct!
OR: I therefore know my friends better, but I have much more trust in my relatives.
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