What is the difference between Generation X and Generation Z?
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My previous generation that it\'s my parents tends to devote for their company. For example, when the boss instructed you , you should follow it even if it\'s not fair. In addition that, you can\'t give them your opinions. If you did it, you can heard about you\'re a rude person. Just, you can\'t think outside the box. But, it has been changing [이름]ce current generation. They want to make up for Work Life Balance. And they think the era of companies guaranteeing old age is over , So they feel that it\'s an era where they have to prepare for themselves.
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Thank you Eric for doing your homework ^^
My previous generation that it\'s my parents tends to devote for their company.
>> The previous generation I know, my parent\'s generation, devoted themselves to their company.
For example, when the boss instructed you , you should follow it even if it\'s not fair.
>> For example, when the boss instructs them, they should follow it even if it\'s not fair.
In addition that, you can\'t give them your opinions.
>> In addition, you cannot give them your opinions and you just have to follow them.
If you did it, you can heard about you\'re a rude person.
>> If you are against them, you will be considered a rude person.
Just, you can\'t think outside the box.
>> It\'s like you cannot think outside the box.
But, it has been changing [이름]ce current generation.
>> But these days it is changing because of today\'s generation.
They want to make up for Work Life Balance.
>> They want to follow the Work-Life balance.
And they think the era of companies guaranteeing old age is over , So they feel that it\'s an era where they have to prepare for themselves.
>> And they think that in this era, companies guarantee the old age is over, so they feel that it\'s time for them to prepare.
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