What is the difference between work and a job? Would you consider the military as a career choice? W
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A terrific essay, Sir [이름]!
It\'s nice that you mentioned the meaning of each word.
We should always be happy with our job.
We are not going to feel tired if we want what we are doing.
I learned something again from you about Korean culture.
Thanks for always sharing a lot of things.
Talk to you in class.
Teacher Nina
“Work” and “Job” are two words that have similar yet different meanings.
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Although they are used interchangeably, their meanings may differ according to how they are used.
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>> OR: Although they are used interchangeably, their meanings may differ according on how they are used in a sentence.
“Work” is defined as a physical or mental activity that is performed in order to accomplish or produce something.
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It is something that an individual does in the performance of his job or of his responsibilities towards his employers.
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“Job” is defined as an activity that an individual performs in exchange for a specific fee or payment.
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It is also referred to as an occupation, profession, or career.
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It is a responsibility of an individual towards his employer that he must perform well because he is paid for it.
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A job is a formal kind of work.
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Working in the military is not an option for Korean men.
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As per the Korean Constitution, all Korean men have a duty to serve in the military for 22 months because we are implementing the conscription system.
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>> OR: As per the Korean Constitution, all Korean men should serve in the military for 22 months because we are implementing the conscription system.
In the military, there are jobs that could help you build your career.
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