What is the difference in living ..?
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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Teacher~
You know more about korea than me.
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I live in 목동.
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홍대 is not far from my house,but I often don\'t go.
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I have been to 이태원 only once.
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If you want to enjoy hot night ,
>> If you want to enjoy a hot night.
you go to 홍대 or 이태원
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There are a lot of young pretty people there.
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There are a lot of Plastic Surgery,restaurants, coffee shop,
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Luxury goods in 강남.
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Cost of living. of course is high.
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Thank you.ㅋㅋ
I will wear my lens before going to bed.
I\'m excited to go to Korea this September ^^ It always had been my dream to go to your country ^^
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