What is the difference in living ..?

2018-06-22 · 첨삭 강사 Gray

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헐 Teacher~ You know more about korea than me. I live in 목동. 홍대 is not far from my house,but I often don't go. I have been to 이태원 only once. If you want to enjoy hot night , you go to 홍대 or 이태원 There are a lot of young pretty people there. There are a lot of Plastic Surgery,restaurants, coffee shop, Luxury goods in 강남. Cost of living. of course is high. Thank you.ㅋㅋ I will wear my lens before going to bed.

강사 첨삭


Teacher~
You know more about korea than me.

>> CORRECT (But if you will use names of anything don\'t forget to use capital letters ^^ like for example: Korea, America, The Philippines, Japan)

 I live in 목동.

>> CORRECT


홍대 is not far from my house,but I often don\'t go.

>> CORRECT


 I have been to 이태원 only once.

>> CORRECT

 If you want to enjoy hot night ,

>> If you want to enjoy a hot night.


you go to 홍대 or 이태원

>> CORRECT

There are a lot of young pretty people there.

>> CORRECT ( I\'M EXCITED TO SEE THEM HAHA)

 There are a lot of Plastic Surgery,restaurants, coffee shop,

>> CORRECT


 Luxury goods in 강남.

>> CORRECT

Cost of living. of course is high.

>> CORRECT

 Thank you.ㅋㅋ
I will wear my lens before going to bed.



I\'m excited to go to Korea this September ^^ It always had been my dream to go to your country ^^

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