What is the difference of Daejon and Seoul\'s transportation system?
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The most notable difference is the diversity of subway routes. Seoul has many subway routes number 1 to number 9. But when I went to Seoul there were another subway except number 1 to 9. But in Daejeon, there is only one subway route so I don\'t get in a wrong one. I heard that there are so many people in Seoul so the traffic jam is serious and that\'s why people in Seoul usually use public transportations.
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The most notable difference is the diversity of subway routes.
>>> CORRECT!
Seoul has many subway routes number 1 to number 9.
>>> CORRECT!
But when I went to Seoul there were another subway except number 1 to 9.
>>>But when I went to Seoul there were other subways except numbers 1 and 9
But in Daejeon, there is only one subway route so I don\'t get in a wrong one.
>>> But in Daejeon, there is only one subway route so I don\'t get in the wrong one.
I heard that there are so many people in Seoul so the traffic jam is serious and that\'s why people in Seoul usually use public transportations.
>>> I heard that there are so many people in Seoul so the traffic jam is serious and that\'s why residents there usually use public transportation.
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