What is the differnce between a hous and a home
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A house is a kind of thing which we can see and touch.
A home is a kind of idea which wa can feel and think.
Actually, I have my house but I don't have my own home.
My house is very clean and cozy but semetimes, I feel very lonely.
I think good home is better than good house.
Nowdays, many people live in nice house but not nice home.
I think nice home is that the fammilly communicate well each other,
they share their daily story even very small thing.
We can find solace in home.
We also can find it in good house but it's very temporary.
It would be best thing If we can have both.
I think that good house can be different depends on the people but maybe good home that we want is amost same. like having good relation ship with familly.
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A house is a kind of thing which we can see and touch.
>>Correct^^A home is a kind of idea which wa can feel and think.>>A home is a more of an idea that we can feel and think about.Actually, I have my house but I don\'t have my own home.
>>Correct^^
>>I actually have a house but I don\'t have my own home.My house is very clean and cozy but semetimes, I feel very lonely.
>>My house is very clean and cozy but sometimes, I feel very lonely.I think good home is better than good house.
>>I think that a good home is better than a good house.Nowdays, many people live in nice house but not nice home.
>>Nowdays, many people live in nice houses but not homes.I think nice home is that the fammilly communicate well each other, they share their daily story even very small thing.
>>I think a nice home is a place where a family communicates well with each and share even the smallest details of their
daily lives.We can find solace in home.
>>We can find solace at home.We also can find it in good house but it\'s very temporary.>>We also can find it in a good house but it\'s very temporary.
>>We can also find it in a good house but it\'s just for a while.It would be best thing If we can have both. >>It would be the best thing if we can have both. I think that good house can be different depends on the people but maybe good home that we want is amost same.
>>I think that good house can be different depending on people but maybe everyone wants a good home.
like having good relation ship with familly.
>>Like having a good relationship with the family.
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