What is the downside of living in an urban or busy hometown?
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Wow, it\'s an interesting thing. :) First, living urban hometown where it\'s outside capital city seems boring. Because there\'s nothing there!! around your place like convenience store, caffe shop, PC shop and bowling station. But I want to live there when I retired. Second, living busy hometown is not only having fun, but also you have to take a risk that air pollution, rush hours and hou[이름]g costs.
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Thank you for your effort in this homework, Elic. Please do check my corrections and study them carefully. Here are some of them.
- Teacher Raven :)
>> Correct. OR Wow, that\'s an interesting thing.
First, living urban hometown where it\'s outside capital city seems boring.
>> First, living in a rural hometown that\'s outside the capital city seems boring.
Because there\'s nothing there!! around your place like convenience store, caffe shop, PC shop and bowling station.
>> Because there\'s nothing there, no convenience stores, no cafes, internet shops, and no bowling stations.
But I want to live there when I retired.
>> However, I want to live there when I retire.
Second, living busy hometown is not only having fun, but also you have to take a risk that air pollution, rush hours and hou[이름]g costs.
>> Also, living in an urban hometown is not all about having fun, but you also have to deal with air pollution, rush hours, and hou[이름]g costs.
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