What is the effect of family vacations on family relationships?

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-Teacher Sandy-

I think a family vacation is very good for building up their relationship.

>> I think a family vacation is a very good chance to building up their relationship.
 This is because even if they are living in the same house, they don\'t have enough time to share their thoughts.

>> Correct.
 In Korea, usually a father is too busy because he has to earn money for his family.

>> Correct.
 Also, a mother should work or do housework.

>> Correct.
 Not only that, sons or daughters should study all days.

>> Not only that, sons or daughters should study everyday.
 Since they are too busy, It is too hard to gather them in the same place to communicate each other.

>> Since they are too busy, It is too hard to gather them in the same place to communicate with each other.
 If they have a family vacation, they can enjoy the trip with family.

>> Correct.
 By having a trip, they will gradually share their thoughts, worries, and concerns.

>> Correct.
 Then, they can understand each other even in the daily life. 

>> Then, they can understand each other better even in their daily lives.
 Finally, They will feel comfort in their family.

>> Correct.