what is the essence of volunteer work?
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In general, I believe that volunteering activities should recognize human dignity and the other party and sustain the activities. For overseas volunteer work I applied for, I believe that strong physical strength, affinity for people, communication skills, and knowledge to teach professional experiences are essential.
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Hello [이름]!
Good work for today\'s composition. See you tomorrow! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>In general, I believe that volunteer activities should recognize human dignity, other parties, and sustain the activities.
2. For overseas volunteer work I applied for, I believe that strong physical strength, affinity for people, communication skills, and knowledge to teach professional experiences are essential.
>>CORRECT!
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