What is the first thing that comes to your mind when you hear the word freedom?
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Hi [이름]! It must be very difficult to live with restrictions. Freedom is truly an empowerment. Let\'s cherish it. Have a good day!~~T.Dee
If I have freedom, I will go out and look around first.
>>CORRECT!
And then try to eat delicious food as much as I can.
>>And then, I will try to eat delicious food as much as I can.
Without freedom, restriction is around me, I will break up first and will scream.
>>When I don\'t have freedom and restriction is around me, I will first breakdown out and I will scream.
>>OR: If I don\'t have freedom, I will try to break out first and I will scream. (Break up, break out and breakdown have different meanings. Check on their meanings to learn more.) ^_^
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