What is the first thing that you always do when you visit a new place?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I visit new country, I usually go to their traditional market. In there, people keep their own food and custom. To experience their culture is a great way to understand that country.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름] U! That\'s a wonderful approach! Immersing yourself in local markets truly brings out the essence of a country\'s culture.
~T. Jenna
When I visit new country, I usually go to their traditional market.
>>When I visit a new country, I usually go to their traditional market first.
In there, people keep their own food and custom.
Correct, or
>>In that place, people maintain their own food traditions and customs.
To experience their culture is a great way to understand that country.
>>Experiencing their culture is a great way to understand a country.
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