What is the first thing you do when you are in a bad mood or condition?
학생이 쓴 원문
My first thing is a deep sleep when I\'m in a bad condition.
A deep sleep makes me the best condition and mood.
I usually sleep about 7 hours. But I often wake up several times through night because of my son who is 6 months old.
We don\'t sleep on the bed together, But his bed is beside my bed because I have to take care of him.
So I often take a nap with my son to regain my condition.
By the way, I have a question, Beth.
Last class, I got the grammer corretion.
following two sentences, what\'s the different \"reveal/emerge\"?
Lately, a new virus is revealed ==> a new virus has emerged.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]. Thank you you for this. Reveal would mean like a secret that was hidden and came to show out of the surface. Emerge would mean to show up or to come to exist. I think it is better to use emerge in this sentence ( Lately, a new virus has emerged.)
- T. Beth
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>>> The first thing I do is sleep when I\'m in a bad condition.
A deep sleep makes me the best condition and mood.
A deep sleep makes me the best condition and mood.
>>> A deep sleep puts me in a best condition and mood.
I usually sleep about 7 hours.
>>> I usually sleep for about 7 hours.
But I often wake up several times through night because of my son who is 6 months old.
>>> But I often wake up several times in the middle of the night because of my son who is 6 months old.
We don\'t sleep on the bed together, But his bed is beside my bed because I have to take care of him.
>>> We don\'t sleep on the same bed together, but his bed is beside my bed because I have to take care of him.
So I often take a nap with my son to regain my condition.
>>> correct
By the way, I have a question, Beth.
>>> correct
By the way, I have a question, Beth.
>>> correct
Last class, I got the grammer corretion.
Last class, I got the grammer corretion.
>>> Last class, I got a grammar correction.
following two sentences, what\'s the different \"reveal/emerge\"?
>>> Following two sentences, what\'s the difference between reveal and emerge?
Lately, a new virus is revealed ==> a new virus has emerged.
>>> Lately, a new virus was revealed ==> a new virus has emerged.
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