What is the first thing you have to consider when traveling? Why? Make a short essay about this.
학생이 쓴 원문
Writing Task: What is the first thing you have to consider when traveling? Why? Make a short essay about this.
The first thing when I consider to travel is beautiful scenery that Korea doesn\'t have .
because I really like to experience new thing such as great scenery and food and culture.
so I\'ve traveled Europe and US for this reasons.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Su A! Thank you for doing your homework today!
Until the next one!
See you in class tomorrow!
~Teacher Sheila
The first thing when I consider to travel is beautiful scenery that Korea doesn\'t have .
>>The first thing I consider when traveling is the beautiful scenery that Korea doesn\'t have.
because I really like to experience new thing such as great scenery and food and culture.
>>Because, I really like to experience new things such as great sceneries, food, and culture.
so I\'ve traveled Europe and US for this reasons.
>>So, I\'ve traveled to Europe and the U.S. for these reasons.
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